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Now, I can remember me.
All because,
she has let me see
a part of her
stowed away past,
painful memories
that tend to last.

Showing me it's okay to cry,
even to the hurtful "Why's?".

It's alright to show
what's inside,
so we no longer
have to shame and hide.

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