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After you my friend,
I will walk through the door,
that stands before us
upon our shaky floor.

It leads to life's
repeated uncertainty.
Or are you waiting
to walk through after me?

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by BobT

After Me
I liked this. Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: June 27, 2007 )

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