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Trampled soil
is where I am left to stand.

A dry, dusty wind
that is followed by the
unforgiving, piercing sand.

Many battles fought
for this colorful, priceless land.

Will we ever move forward
with the same goal at hand?

Heavy egos
seem to be the one
and only popular brand.

Is there a mutual song
that can be embraced
from the notorious marching band?

Or, is this thought unthinkable
and something that is just too grand?




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