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The year is 3609 on the planet earth. This planet has been turned into nothing more then a desert. The humans used up all the fuel and all the water. Traveling must be done on foot, or if you one of the lucky few, on a horse. Deaths are greater then ever before, not just from the heat and lack of water, but from bandits and assassins. Though they usually only attack the rich, every once in a while a poor family would show up dead. It seems the humans will rage war even when there nothing to fight. How pathetic we have become, but at the same time we have gained power. With little things to try and rule, it is easier to take control. Those who are poor don't even bother to put up a fight. At least all but one small town. The small town, of only a 176 people, is so small it doesn't even have a name, and yet no one have be able to control this town. Which is not always a good thing. This means there is no law, there is no order, there is no caring. They do as they please, with no remorse. Killing, raping, robbing, attacks, everything. But those who try to stay safe don't leave, because they couldn't live being controlled by those with money. But now someone has stood up and waged war on this small town. This town was destroyed and those left over was sent out to wonder around. These 'outsiders' are not allowed in other towns, from fear they might start an uproar, so soon they started a new village, still ruled by no one, but peaceful, more peaceful then all the other towns. No one tries to take over this village, but now to many people are wanting to join, and yet again another war broke out, but now it wasn't just a village that was killed off, it was everyone that was left on the planet. How pathetic we humans can be. Forcing peace upon our selves just for it to end up in a war. So now human race was wiped out and this desert planet is empty. It's time to start over now.
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The year is 4578 on the planet Earth. It seems it's all going to repeat again, oh how ignorant we humans are. Never looking to the past for wisdom or answers, always looking to the future that will never be. Will it end up the same as before? Or will people finally understand what they are doing wrong? Good luck with that, the first village has already been destroyed and the new peaceful one has been created. But this time there is a difference. There are a few who do understand and they left. The village was destroyed but those who left lived on and learned more about their past. Now there is the great city of Tuyi, with technology, food, clothing, fuel, and most important water. When the planet started over, all the humans went to Tuyi.
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The year is 5124 on the planet Earth. There are no history books to tell what they are doing wrong any more. Is everything going right, or is it going to end up just like before. Are we humans to pathetic and ignorant to keep living in this peace or can we finally able to understand right from wrong, even though this heat of the land might fog what is right. Maybe this desert could go back how it was before or maybe it might just make it worse. Who knows?


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