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Echos fading, hear I listen
don't know what's been going on,
now that you've been gone.

I try to smile now
but it feels so wrong
This happy face is fake
ever since your wake.

How can they just move on
how can the be that strong?

I couldn't wear their shoes
that's not what I would choose.

They seem so distant now
but I still cry out loud
for you
and I will always wonder
where you are
I wish you were back here with me
my dear....

so what, so what should I care?
I don't think I even do,

I've lost all meaning
the moment I lost you.

I can't seem to escape this
your still in my dreams
and it hurts me so badly, I can't pretend
I got over you, I'll never be over you
ever, no never, who could blame me?
If they knew you like I did, they'd see
how wonderful you were, to everyone, to
someone, to me.


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