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Make No Move

It was the greatest,
you were the greatest,
rush of blood upon my head.

This was the latest,
I have to say this,
you made me wish that I was dead.

Here I still lie,
no wonder why,
the only thing I think of is you.

You turned into,
you went into,
inside of me and shot right though.

So when I hear the phone ring,
I rush to see who is it,
hope you'll come to visit.
I hope you'll always visit.

But it's never you that's calling,
I'll wait and wait until,
you finally call, I know you will.
I do believe you really will.

Blankly staring out,
no name calling out,
silence is my beautiful rescue.

My mouth drying up,
please fill up this cup,
so I can have another sip of you.

Please give into me,
I need you to see,
that I am your other half.

Don't do this right now,
I can't fathom how,
you can still smile and laugh.


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