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Ive spent
So many hours
Sitting
Sulking
Contemplating
Sinking deep into
Mire

Why?
This is golden
This is treasure
I can discover a new world
Among the treasure trove

I see her
Red hair and all
Swimming underwater
Among the wreckage
Richness

There are stories here
There is experience
Lessons to change the world

But shes not happy
Ariel will leave me
My inspiration gone

I cannot tell of this world
Why?
Is it because it is not to be stored
Away in its trunk yet
Or is it that the wreckage
Has defiled me

Will I never write again?



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"Soul of my soul of the soul of a hundred universes,
be water in this now-river, so jasmine flowers
will lift on the brim, and someone far off
can notice the flower-colors and know
there's water here."


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The following comments are for "Will I Never Write Again"
by IcicleIcicle

Love It
I like it, very nice flow! This is one of the few poems I see on here that actually enlightens me. Nice piece.

( Posted by: kraziRenee [Member] On: June 16, 2007 )





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