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Blood Lust

The candle burns it's brightest flame
As i wait for the pain of night
I feel it scratching in my veins
Till the virgin's, mortal life i bite

Your screaming shadows will forever last
As memorial to my agony
For i must feed my livid corpse
Till from this curse i am set free

My heart and soul will forever burn
With temptation to kill this bloodlust
When the darkness grows i stand alone
With desire for love and a longing for trust

I watch this world of dead stars at night
With my immortal fear your blood must flow
You must never see my heart inside
With this eternal pain i've come to know

As you cursed me, i now curse them
With tears that fall as cold as ice
Your slaughter rules this lonely night
Until at dawn the sun shall rise.

I Live For The Pain

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