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I've been waiting for this moment
To take your hands in mine
And lead you to forever
Our bodies will be entwined
In each other's sweet surrender
We'll stay the night to find
Each other in the morning
With your hands held tight in mine

"Never give up!"

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The following comments are for "Hands Held Tight"
by JoeyB

it's just nice to read something that's unashamedly sweet...

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: June 8, 2007 )

for your very kind words!

( Posted by: JoeyB [Member] On: June 8, 2007 )

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