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Come sail with me, Pirate,
And sing me a tune
of how the sea
reflects the moon.

Come laugh with me, Pirate,
at the stars far away.
So loud we can't hear
what they have to say.

Come watch with me, Pirate,
the descending sun
reflecting on the sea.
Sky and water are one.

Come sail with me, Pirate,
into this great abyss.
Roam the waters forever.
If not, blow me a kiss.


------
DJ '08


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