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In my field of insecurity, i am dwelling on the actions of society.
The ants are scattering over my cement oasis. In a world for the small, the ground appears so spaceious. Yet in my world of the tall i am fighting the urge to break through the barriers of life that hold me back. Fighting, traveling forward with a full on attack. Attempting the formation of change allowing myself become able to explore the boundaries of the unknown and strange. Enjoying the explorationg of my feelings and the immediate reaction. Understanding who i am on my own, thats the accomplishment i achieve whem my mind if full grown

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