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There was a spirit inside of me that I could never contact,
a lost soul that was looking for, something I didn't have.
A child with dreams and ideals, a kid with no direction.
A side of me I will never be, a true strength to be admired.
The little voice that sways me to impulsively give in,
not enough to help me out, just enough to get me tangled up.
The spirit wants to guide, but I can't find the courage to follow.
Truly ashame though, she has everything I want me to be.
A singer, a poet, the little girl on the airplane, but now I can't fly.
Somewhere I lost my spirit, that something that pushes me...
that thing that gives me the reason to go on, to strive!
I wish I could find it, I don't know how much longer I can be like this.
I am locked in my tower, waiting, until the day I will be free again.


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