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If happiness was a lifetime
and grievance not a breath,
would rainbows still be
rare and beautiful?

If time had slim reason
and cycles tuned to lines,
could limbs still stretch out
in comfort?

And if passion was everlasting
and security in the genes,
would a bouquet still be
a generous surprise?

Still, summers will turn to autumn
as sentiments begin to change

and as our moments
become memories,

I want you to know,
Iíll miss you.

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The following comments are for "Moments become Memories"
by silverscent

Very sweet sentiment!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: June 11, 2007 )

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