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I don't know what to say
but i will say what i know
i know that tommorow will be another day
and someone will deny a seed a chance to grow

Some babies are made to be born
some are born to be dumped
others are created to be loved
the remaining ones those never to be known

The later, the people of my race
the unknown,we who have no place
the seeds that will not grow
the angels we will never know

A faint inthe world of darkness
we spend time swimming in the waters of lonliness

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WAR WITHOUT END


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The following comments are for "An Ode From Your Unborn Child"
by warangel

Depressing
This is depressing, but I think it is good on a writing stand point. I am bothered by it, but I guess because it has a lot of reality in it. Not bad, just not my thing.

( Posted by: kraziRenee [Member] On: June 2, 2007 )





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