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We lie awake, on night’s pier we lay
Searching the heavens for stars at bay
Tangled into one, united we stayed
While the moon caressed us with its rays

Boats rocking to the soothing waves
As we lie and remained the same,
Together as one
Inseparable till the break of day

Cuddling, kissing, these were the ways
We spend our night romanticizing, hoping it would delay
The sky turning a bit cloudy, a drop of rain
We feared no water, on the pier we stayed

Hours passed as still we lay
Noticing the moon wandering off, starting to fade
This was saddening because we wanted it to stay
For the moon parting its ways meant we were near the break of day

One last kiss,
One last cuddle,
Each other we gave
Ending a night which in our thoughts…would forever stay.

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