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Teardrops
to sooth my
trembling hands

Reflections of a past
from broken glass

A shiver in the night
from the hollow air

A prick from a thorn
to make one bleed

Shift the clouds,
so my mind can wander



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by BobT

Teardrops
Very well done thanks for sharing.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: June 6, 2007 )

Teardrops
Simple and profound. Nice job!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: June 7, 2007 )





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