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Your cold breath upon me
has left me stale
What was my mistake
that led us to fail?

Did I guide you
to trip over my feet?
Or was the hill
we were climbing
just way too steep?

I never knew of your wound
that needed to be licked
I was too worried about
fetching your beating stick

It was from the disgusted
look on your face
that left me feeling
way out of place

A wandering soul
is what you led me to be
Lost in the woods
was the only way
to be free
because, your choking collar
was starting
to strangle me


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The following comments are for "Out of place"
by BobT

Ouch!
Wow, I am almost at a loss for words. I like this, it flowed nice and it gave some great insight into what I gathered to be a doomed relationship, good work!

( Posted by: kraziRenee [Member] On: June 2, 2007 )





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