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What an oddity, you look so oddly towards me.
Yet I sit unfazed by your effortless expressions.
True I am an enigma, but I keep all pieces visable.
You are the one with a stone face, I can\'t imagine.
How about laughter? Can you still pull that off?
Only if it\'s in pity of other, someone elses cost.
Limply I allow you to hold me, though I feel so used.
How can you call this love? It\'s just me being abused.
I know your afraid, that I\'ll run so far so fast.
So blindly into the night, like a cat being chased.
I need to get out, you are wrapped inside my head!
This feeling of remorse, you cry, but I am the true fool.
I believed in you, all those promises you gave.
Not one of the fufilled! Not another as long as I live.
Curse you beyond the spells and moons I scream wishes apon.
You are much stronger a demon, you know who to prey on.
Foolish me, foolish me! How could I ever let you in!
I swear I knew better, I had up a wall to keep you out.
I tested every door, I locked my windows tight.
I pulled out all my knights, yet you stood unfazed.
What will it ever take to make you move on from here?
How many times I threaten, you never step foot outside.
Here I will suffer and pray that it\'ll all end someday soon.
I\'ll count on my lucky stars and scream wishes at my dear moon.




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krazi-Renee


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The following comments are for "Wishes For My Moon"
by kraziRenee

Okay..
I have no idea how the slashes got onto my poem, they weren't there when I wrote it. So if you can, please disregard them while reading it.

( Posted by: krazirenee [Member] On: May 30, 2007 )





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