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Things change and I in time change with these things
More roads, and many more fresh wanderings.
So grab your bag lets go and see Tomorow,
let\'s go before yesterday is here.

Do you see what they did to the horizon?
Just a few they said, and like so many things.
the skyline\'s full of artificial things.

There\'s time, and there are ways to get things done now,
So pack your bags, bring a beer or two.
We\'ll camp over the hill next to forever,
A few doors down from where were going to.

Do you know we\'ve done what was never dreamed of?
things no-one ever meant to do...
but were all in this one together, me myself and I, and you...

But why worry over things that are forgotten?
like many of the worlds lesser men?
sifting through the dust of time and often,
seeking what we may now and then.

Do we still walk or do we stop?
what is it that you forgot?
is there time...maybe not.













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The following comments are for "dissatisfaction"
by wally 5

dissatisfaction
the title's spot on, dissatisfaction indeed...

I see souls trying to find self and keep pace in and with an ever-changing world... has qualities of almost desperate hope, and not knowing...

"But why worry over things that are forgotten?" but of course, everybody does... true. enjoyed this, felt real.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: June 1, 2007 )





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