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Tears of anger
Tears of blood
Tears of anguish
Tears of lust

Tears of the soul
Tears of gold
Tears of love
Tears so cold

Tears of loss
Tears are just
Tears that vanish
Tears Iíve got

Tears I mold
Tears I shed
Tears of water
My eyes have bled





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The following comments are for "Tears"
by deraj

Emulating Tears!
Tears can have so many different meanings; sometimes it gets confusing, but you point out many of their possible identities in this short poem. Now every time I cry, I will be compelled to ask myself: "What kind of tears do my eyes bleed?"

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: May 31, 2007 )





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