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Just a glance of your eyes, bring me down to my knees.
But do not fret; I know we can never be.

Locked away I will keep you now and forever,
However hidden I will always remember.

Regrets fill me up, but the past is not changeable.
But if I could, Iím not sure I really would.
Cause mistake is my name and I know no other.

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