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You're fat and you're lazy, and creepy and crazy.
Your breath could derail a train.

Emotional issues with broken-down tissues. You think with an undersized brain.

You're vile, you're trouble, but don't burst my bubble and call me a gold-digging witch.

'Cause while others ignore you, my heart still beats for you.. and it sure doesn't hurt that you're rich...

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The following comments are for "Love $tory"
by TriteAndTrue

This is a cute piece, with true love so rare, why wait for prince broke when you can have the king pin.

( Posted by: lovesessence [Member] On: June 8, 2007 )

Wish I had read this before I found Prince Broke. My compliments, this poem made my day.

( Posted by: jfausnaugh [Member] On: December 7, 2007 )

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