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Dear mother,




So many things you want me to say,




ďIíll never leave you, ill be your doll




And let you catch me when I fall




But there is one thing ill let you know




Its not the way things go.





Let go of my hand, was my first word,




And counts today as much as then




Too many breaking hearts and lies I heard




And now its time to go, this is the end.





So goodbye mother, I wish you pleasant dreams,




Dream of happy times, of merry things




Dream of the life you want, yet never have




Dream of your perfect daughter and perfect dad.





As much as your money pleases me,




Its not who I am, what I want to be




My heart follows a path you canít perceive.




So many things youíll never know




Its just the way things go.









So if that plane could leave today




Take me a million miles away




I swear id run as fast as I can,




And never turn to look back again.









I hope one day when my race is run




And that sun starts to set on me




Ill still be young, ill still run free




I wont regret a single word




Never look back upon your world





Goodbye my mother




This is the end




And if you try to keep me, ill let you know




Its not the way things go.



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The following comments are for "Just the way things go"
by Shaza89

capitalize
use the upper case with I'll and it will work better. " My heart follows a path you canít perceive." Don't like that line at all. Maybe a stanza showing how the person being talked to doesn't understand would help.

( Posted by: bhagwandave [Member] On: May 29, 2007 )





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