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--It's been going on for long--

From twilight where man's born
... modern ant hills
cacooned in all night light
keeps stars away
now on every corner
we battle to loss superstition.

By: David E. Howerton

Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game

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by bhagwandave

instead of

"..we battle to loss superstition. .."


we -- battle lost superstitions .

( Posted by: ericm [Member] On: May 18, 2007 )

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