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Sepia sings a song of sadness,
weaving though both place and time,
turning people into madness
With a soft touch to the mind.

Like a rhyme so long forgotten
flows and ebbs back yet again,
features of those long departed
Blur and haze ‘til memories end.

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by loveandlimeaid

Very well written here. Loved the first line introduction with alliteration. Enchanting imagery, thanks for sharing.

( Posted by: silverscent [Member] On: May 18, 2007 )

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