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Boarding the train
I look for my luggage
cries of theft

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R K Singh


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The following comments are for "TRAVEL"
by R.K.Singh

TRAVEL
The atmosphere, condensed, compressed and distilled in those three little lines is overwhelming… at it should be. an intense piece, a vivid rendering.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: May 11, 2007 )

travel
Thanks, AuldMiseryGuts, for appreciating this one.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: May 16, 2007 )

Haiku
I like this poem, too, because it's as if everyone's heart is concealed in a travel bag & we can all legitimately cry, "theft!"

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: May 17, 2007 )

travel
Thanks, Gomar, for appreciating this hauku.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: May 19, 2007 )





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