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Artful words I write
When my mind I use as sight
Inspirational words I conceive
To those who are in need

The absence of ink is no rub
For the minds ink is thought
Paper is only good to the eyes that see
True poetry is that which we live, which we feel

I write these words through one spirited mind
This could give light to the blindest of blind
My words derive from my actions
Which serve the sole purpose of intellectual satisfaction

Seeing is believing
But feeling is lifeís true meaning
Emotion is a sub state of the mind
Which unites souls and creates an endless bind

Letís honor the intellectual few
Whose art we read, feel, breath and makes us shed tears like dew
Letís unite together
And enjoy the wealth of the minds words forever



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The following comments are for "artful words i write"
by deraj

lifes meaning...
"seeing is believeing, but feeling is lifes true meaning".... those few words make up a million different pictures in my mind. i like your peice, its been a long time since you've written and im glad to see your back! keep writting-

( Posted by: grandmasgirl [Member] On: May 23, 2007 )

thx
thx :D, i know it has been a while. so how you doing?

( Posted by: deraj [Member] On: May 28, 2007 )





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