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Feelings come alive
Something awakens deep inside
Without you I can survive
I am sick of all of your lies

You lied to me
But I try to see
The good things about you

You want to be
Your Majesty
But I wont obey you
Cause you’ve lied to me

In the shadows something hides
Readying itself to take your life
Demons awaken you
From the things that you do

You lied to me
But I try to see
The good things about you

You want to be
Your Majesty
But I wont obey you
Cause you’ve lied to me

You’ve said to me
That you want to be
With me forever

But now I see
That you’ve lied to me
No I wont be with you ever
Cause you lied to me

You pretend that nothing has happened
You pray that this wont be the end
Stop lying to me and please send
Some aid for these wounds wont mend

You lied to me
But I try to see
The good things about you

You want to be
Your Majesty
But I wont obey you
Cause you’ve lied to me

You’ve said to me
That you want to be
With me forever

But now I see
That you’ve lied to me
No I wont be with you ever
Cause you lied to me

Ever since the first day
(You’ve lied to me)
I couldn’t believe a word you said
(You’ve lied to me)

Now it’s done
It was fun
Now we’re done
Cause you’ve lied to me



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The following comments are for "You Lied To Me"
by XeroKraken

You Lied to Me
Good Stuff! Keep writing!

( Posted by: Robaam [Member] On: August 20, 2007 )

Lying
Have you read Pulsewriters "Lies"? Sounds like a similar experience.
I hate lying. Were you really able to let this person go? If you did, I give you alot of credit. No relationship works with lying and mistrust. Hang your head high. If this person was lying, believe me, they're not worth it. You're better than that! (yet I know it still hurts)

( Posted by: Robaam [Member] On: December 9, 2010 )

To Be Or Not To Be...what was the question?????
If it turns out to be not true, is it then a lie? I think not.
Today I love you and want to spend forever with you. Tomorrow, you have changed and so it is not possible to want that.
Yesterday I loved the Beatles.
Today I am sick of them.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: December 9, 2010 )





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