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Her hair so fair
Skin soft, supple and white
Eyes deep with care

Her heart as big as a mountain
Comforting all who live there

Lips so fine
Taste like honey each time

Hands so small
Cups my heart with awe

Our embrace is warm
Raising my spirit like the dawn
Rekindles my fire, which I thought was gone

How wonderful life is each time she is near
Bringing me peace along with good cheer

How happy am I that I found My Flower
Your nectar so sweet with an overcoming power

Phillip Hunter Davis

Phillip Hunter Davis

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The following comments are for "My Flower"
by Dadunique

I assume that this is about your wife? very nice, i liked this a lot :)

( Posted by: thebeast [Member] On: May 3, 2007 )

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