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My Father whom I did not know
Left my life like the first fallen snow

My heart ached as I grew without
No memories of him; no times out

All alone without his wisdom
Out of touch from him in that kingdom

My shadow grew a little each year
Living without him and his good cheer

No father to catch my dreams or to watch me grow
No, not with me to let me know

My shadow is all grown now; father I pray that you're proud
But then, only you would know that high up in the clouds

Phillip Hunter Davis

Phillip Hunter Davis

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