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Into the sunrise,
through the golden gates,
You walked into his arms today,
you went with peacefulness and faith.

Im sad you left this earth now,
we wanted you to see us grow,
but we all know your in better place now,
and now we all have to let go.

You were like a grandma to us girls,
you meant the world to us all,
but now we know you have no pain,
just remember, we love you most.

Although you left the earth today,
and our hearts are breaking fast,
we all know it was the right thing,
and were all happy your free at last.

You've now flown to heaven,
and greeted the ones you love,
God has a bigger plan for you,
and now we will never give up.

Your faith has kept me going,
your prayers have comforted me,
now id just like to say thank you,
for never giving up on me.

Your grandsons are growing up now,
they're becoming young adults.
please check up on all of us,
please keep your love close.

Your daughter mourns from sadness,
yet she'll make it all okay,
she has a big heart like you,
and she shares it with us everyday.

please watch over us all,
as we try to cope with you flying away.
we love you and we will be thinking of you,
everynight and everyday.

So go into those golden gates,
but your wings on and soar,
watch over us and be happy,
for today, is your first day to fly


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