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I've been poisoned the reason
Is that of your treason
Against my sanity
I've been stopping my sanity
From becoming deaths vanity
And now you will believe
Believe that your last breathe
Will be that of your death
And now please set me free

(Chorus)
Run away from me
Give me a pulse
Let me breath
Let my heart beat slowly
Let me form into you
My pulse just throbs through
Parts of me thats bruised

The destruction of my life
Will be consumed by the knife
The one that let me bleed
Bleed through all those days
Bleed in all those ways
In which you caused
Caused by being
And caused by seeing
The way I am now and always

(Chorus)
Run away from me
Give me a pulse
Let me breath
Let my heart beat slowly
Let me form into you
My pulse just throbs through
Parts of me thats bruised

You let bleed
You took my needs
You stole my heart
You ripped it apart
You lied to me
How can this be

(Chorus)
Run away from me
Give me a pulse
Let me breath
Let my heart beat slowly
Let me form into you
My pulse just throbs through
Parts of me thats bruised



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The following comments are for "Pulse"
by lifeasweknowit

Interesting
WOW... very good writing...but the corus does not seem to have the same rythem. I really like the versus though..maybe it sounds better with the cords

~heartbreakersbeware

( Posted by: heartbreakersbeware [Member] On: May 3, 2007 )





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