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As I laid down for a nights rest,
I close my eyes and and realize,
My trance my sleep, I travel deep,
through the quantum gate of eternity's bliss.

Aho oh my , where am I,
but on a metal gurney with lights so bright,
The doctors eyes where quite surprised,
That I knew he wasn't human height.

To bad for him his needles where thin,
My mind to your mind your thoughts to my thoughts,
"Silly Grey your no match for me,
pick on others your own size."

The laser light was blinding blue,
My eye implant was nothing new,
$20,000 government waste no worry,
Idiot taxpayers pay in no haste.

"How much do you know?" the biorobot asked,
"Enough to kick your fucking ass,"
33 electrotrobes pass torture through my veins,
My twisted mind, oh the pain.

Executive Control Board = 33123113211,
The computer terminal connects to Omega,
"We are proud of our creations." Thought the Grey,
"Holographically elegant perfection today."

"How simple is this procedure for sure.
The drugs make it a forgettable chore.
He wakes up in a daze.
Blood in his nose no worry its day."

------
Live and Learn


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The following comments are for "Two Hours at Area 51"
by lonewolf

cliche
rot - plz Project Blue Book in this context is sooo boring; old hippy crap. and "33123113211" like couldn't you pick some other prime numbers to seem "quite karmic" ???!!!!! like 17 or 113, or something?

"Enough to kick your fucking ass," oooohh like bad language cursing and all; why would a robot say that ?!??!?! Refer to "Wetworld" by Rudy Rucker.

"Blood in his nose no worry its day."

ummm you mean " .. it's day." riiiiiight?!??! like

.. har har "no worry ?!??!?! That's just a bunch of kiwi-looser-stuff. Don't even go there. Do you even come from New Zeland??? I've lived with them for 3 years. ENOUGH!!!

"IT IS DAY"

which in fact would have been a more punchy end.

think of it -- stark caps

in arial gee word-art

BLOOD --

In his Nose



I T I S D A Y



ain't it a bitch when someone thinks up something better than you?

P.S. Visit Chicago someday and scope out the art/photog/literature scene.


( Posted by: ericm [Member] On: May 18, 2007 )

Response
"33123113211" is a Monarch programming trigger used to deprogram victims of government mind control.

The comment "Enough to kick your fucking ass," was made by the victim not by the (bio)robot.

I used the word worry because it rhymed with other words but I think it could be taken out, as it does some somewhat clicheish.

Blood is in the nose because needles are most commonly inserted at this location by MILAB abductions.

Thanks for the comments.....

( Posted by: lonewolf [Member] On: May 20, 2007 )





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