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I have been on vacation in California since I moved here
My father said "Oh I predict you'll stay for a month and then come back"
Five years later I am still on vacation.
In San Francisco
My friends?
They all got here two years ago and are still realizing that the vacation-
doesn't end.
It's ok with me and its ok with them.
Vacations shouldn't end right?
San Francisco and Oakland are enough for all of us-
or in the end to me-
It's not a vacation because of the amount of people that visit
It's not a vacation because of all the wondrous bridges and sights
Were all born here and then we fall apart
with regret
We get sucked into tradition
into family values
we never think twice about are morals
until we move to san francisco
then everything changes for the air

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Lee Leslie can be found @ myspace.com/expressionsession and Leo.altpro.net


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