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I am so sorry baby
But I simply cannot stand
It any more

Your parents
Must go

Since the day they
Conceived
It was a poor planned
Life they played

They were so immature
And reckless

You’re coming with me now
It’s time they say goodbye

They should have helped you
When you needed it
If they didn’t want to let you go now

They should have been your check book
When you had your first car accident

A baby on the road
They didn’t stop their babe
Buying an expensive car
And they didn’t help you pay it either

When they asked why
You got an F in English
They should’ve asked themselves
Why they received an F as parents

Let’s not talk about it anymore babe
We’re done with them

I’ll be the mommy
If you’ll be a man


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"You're so free, yeah you were right about me,
Can I get myself back from underneath this guilt that will crush me,
And in the choir i saw a sad messiah,
He was bored and tired of my laments,
said 'I died for you one time but never again.'"
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