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i am what i am.

i want to explore life to the fullest.

i want to be bad sometimes.

but i am good most of the times.

just like anyone i have my bad days,

but music makes me alive for a day.

i dont wanna live life to other people's expectations.

i want to live my life as my own.

but i see to it that i do things il never regret.

i want to try new things, extreme things,

like jumping from the a plane or use a vine to swing.

i want to learn and learn

so that in the future i can earn.

i love my family coz they are always there for me.

all my life i want to really make them happy.

i dont hate love but now i dont wanna fall in love yet.

there's always a right time for love i bet.

i want to graduate not because i need to.

its just because i want to.

i believe that God exists,

coz without Him i would not persist.

i hate to see people sufferin,

coz everyone ought to be sharin.

i may not talk about these things so much.

but i never stop caring for the people i hunch.

as a said love has no room for me yet.

i just wanna make my parents proud first.

by doing great things not necessarily for them.

but doing things that will make them say "that's our son,that's him!"

i am what i am,

but not all the time im serious coz i know how to jam.

if you really wanna know me,

im just here although you dont see.


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