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People think they know as they will be,
but in the dark I'm the only one who can see.

A piece in the emptying hour glass is missing,
the question is how long do you have to find it.

If only you could see in the crystal ball,
If only you could know the truth.
See what I can see,
be what I may be.

Though in the dark I may see,
still it doesn't shed any light onto me.

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