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--But wouldn't it?--

Once or twice it's seemed
I might get out before
paranoia took over.
Couldn't believe we'd allow
this stupidity to take over.
Was I wrong. Not for want of telling.
But I'm always surprised
by the ignorance encountered.
Wouldn't it be nice to hear someone say,
"How's this going to be implemented?" and
"What's in place to keep it from being abused?"
Most don't even think about that.
While those wanting power always poo-poo
anyone saying, "Hey, wait a minute this is abuseable."
Like how dare you
figure out
my real intentions.
Hoping the rest of us
are too stupid to listen.





By: David E. Howerton


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Coyote Laughs
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The following comments are for "But wouldn't it?"
by bhagwandave

Bad Bodo
You have a mispelling in the very last line: the first "to" should be spelled "too."

Other than that, very trippy poem. Hope you feel better soon.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: April 21, 2007 )

Not do good
I agree with gomarsoap's observation.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: April 21, 2007 )

mistake
Hmmm. At least someone spotted it. Don't know how that got by me.

( Posted by: bhagwandave [Member] On: April 22, 2007 )

Trickster
Mistake probably caused by that laughing trickster Coyote!

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: April 26, 2007 )





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