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I made this song for my girlfriend. I hope you like it.






All the things that Iíve been through
Have been made simpler because of you
The love you show, the life you give
Is reason enough for us to live

My love for you grows with each passing day
I hate to leave you and go so far away
But please baby do not cry
I promise you that I wonít die
Not until I see your bright green eyes

Those bright green eyes are what drew me to you
They showed me reasons for me to be good to you
The only beauty that I want to see isÖyour bright green eyes

Memories of days that we spent together
It makes me want to live forever
I donít want to lose you baby
Please be with me
Please let me see
Your bright green eyes

Those bright green eyes are what drew me to you
They showed me reasons for me to be good to you
The only beauty that I want to see is
Your bright green eyes
Their light shows me the way
And now Iím here with you today
I never want to hear you say, good-bye
I always want to see
I always want to be
I always want to look into
Those bright green eyes





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