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Nite ie my dearest dad,
I miss you more than you will ever know.
Why oh why did you have to leave?
Why oh why did you have to go?
My life is so empty now,
I just dont know what to do.
I"d give my own life if i thought,
It would bring you back to us.
A void has filled our lives my friend,
The biggest void of all.
The only comfort that we have is that you are fre of pain.
Soon i will be wed for 30years,
A party we shall have.
But it will not be like it used to be,
Because of my dear dad.
So on that very special night,
The first anily oarty without you.
We shall raise our glasses and shout your name,
We shall not forget you.
I will blow a kiss and cry a tear,
And thank god for sending us someone so dear.
You sleep now m dearest dad,
Now your pain is gone.
You suffered all your life but never did you complain.
You left behind a legacy of love,respect and truth.
You did your job proud man,now take a rest and sleep.
We love you.
Your work on earth is done,
All i ask is you waitfor us,
So we can all unite again.
To be the family we were on earth.
We miss and love you so much.
Good night our gentle giant.xxxxxxx

------
a johnson alias nita brown


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The following comments are for "nite nite dad.xxx"
by nitabrown

heart filled..
wow... this peice is touching... one thing tho. dont say goodbye o your dad. you will see him again someday and he is still up in the sky watching you. keep writting, i loved the poem and it breaks my heart that you had a reson to write a peice like that.

( Posted by: grandmasgirl [Member] On: April 20, 2007 )





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