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What can I tell you about the day before
A day full of light, happiness and joy
Until my way to the world I tore
For which my parents said "ahoy

A holly flyer I was or may be an angel
Or even a small cute devil
All of this forgotten when dandled
And raised to be "moral" and "civil"

I may not have even existed
Or I was only a tiny shiny soul
And when with flesh bonded
Started a life full of joy and haul

Truth would only be known
The day after our bodies foul:
We start dying
The moment we are born

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