Average Rating 8 (1 votes) Rating Rated by 8 chinadoll You must login to vote One Day Ill Be Like You One day old man Ill be like you My hands tired and torn My back hunched over My steps slow My driving slower My grandchildren lighting my eyes My medicine cabinet full of things to save me One day old man Ill be like you And they would laugh at me Though they would one day be like me One day old woman Ill be like you My hair dry and gray My weight little from not eating My cooking still superb My heart heavy laden My grandchildren given my name My heart near collapse One day old woman Ill be like you And they will laugh at me Though they would one day be like me by Cynthia Yildirim Copyright 2007 All Rights Reserved ____________________________ See my new website http://cynthiayildirim.googlepages.com/home Buy my poetry book Garden Pleasures http://www.bbotw.com/description.asp?ISBN=0-7414-3865-8 ------ Cynthia R. Yildirim *~Love is the hidden element~* Check out my Yahoo 360 Blog: http://360.yahoo.com/sydneyluvv25

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