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With fidgeting phalanges and emphatic extremities, the bumbling black magician
works his dorky demonics:

"All Gods creatures (um,uhhh)
Great and small (yeah,huh-huh)
Poop on statues (snort!)
Short and tall (nyuk,nyuk,nyuk)"

"Dat'll teach dem official pricks ta confiscate mah personal,private mannequin collection!
Oh Mabel Sue,how I'll miss you,

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "Voodoo Hex of a Reluctant Iconoclast"
by metrozol

Voodoo Hex
what an image that conjures! comic, surreal, and just that little bit disturbing. raised a twisted smile not felt on my face for a long time. thanks for that.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 17, 2007 )

Good, better,...
and more nuttyflavored wisdom!
with just the right amount of unrest!
well done! well done! well done!

( Posted by: louis14 [Member] On: April 17, 2007 )

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