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You've closed the door,
That I've tried to keep open.
The door was the symbolization of our relationship.
A relationship between a father and a daughter.
You've pushed me away,
For the last time.
Your decision has become clear to me.
I am nothing to you as you are nothing to me.
We say that we love each other,
But that are all lies.
We are like strangers from the street,
No connection to each other.
So, I've come to say goodbye,
Because you left me.
I've come to say goodbye,
because my love for you is unwanted.
No more should we be acquainted.
You go your way as I go mine.
Never may we cross paths again.
Goodbye.

------
Erica R. Lindsey aka Windsong [got married in '08]



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