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What means do we have to raise
that white peace flag?
To step out and shake hands,
erase
our destructive war?

My open palm has been extended
but grows weary of dodging bullets.
So won't you grasp it -
Mightily!
and not let go?



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The following comments are for "Sole Peace"
by ak7raplt

fantastic!
I feel such strength in this poem.....keep that hand outstretched! I feel the way the words came out it was like an anti-battle cry....but a sharp cry all the same.

( Posted by: DarkMagic [Member] On: January 15, 2003 )





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