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You guys suck
all this bullshit
all these bullshit
words people write
it all sucks
it\'s all bullshit

Wah Wah
my boyfriend left me
aww my girlfriend
she likes somebody else
wahh wahh
my life sucks
and I am going
to write about it

See nobody writes
how they really
feel

it\'s just stupid poem
after stupid poem

so there might be some
truth to some writers
but most of them
suck








I suck too
don\'t worry
I am going to die soon
my life is no greater than yours
no more artistic
no more sac-religious



your all just a bunch of rebels
selling out to your TV
go watch \"I love New York\"
or \"The Hills\"
lazy fucking bastards.

------
Lee Leslie can be found @ myspace.com/expressionsession and Leo.altpro.net


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The following comments are for "Suck"
by LeeLeslie

sucking
Aye… well, that’s one way of looking at it. but then very few- if any- of even the best poems/ poets transcend all that trivial ‘wah-wah’ ego stuff. you write what you know, you know? some are just better executed than others…

…I get days when I feel like this too. I tend to tell myself if I can’t stand the heat then hang up my pen… that resolution doesn’t usually last very long ;)

There are great poems out there and there are some really not-so-great poems. I reckon even the not-so-great poems are valid. If nothing else, the attempt is worth something. Or it ought to be…

provocative poem... but then you know that, right?

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 6, 2007 )

Sucking
I agree with Shannon. Writers write what they feel
some is good some bad. At least they write what they feel. There are days I dont even want to pick
up pen.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: April 6, 2007 )





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