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Those two souls who lived
even longer than some stars
shall meet time and time again

each will beg the archangel
who guards the gates
for the other’s arcane hearthstone

a little higher than mortals
in this lifetime of neoteric barbarians
they shall possess the regency
that outshines princes
and the dazzle that their last deaths
only intensified

I know the signs to this
most awaited rarefied collision
the ones I was oblivious of
only when your arrival
was not yet revealed:
the upheavals in my chest
akin to impending sunblasts
the phrensy in my brain
like meteors swarming
a newborn cosmos

I reclaim you
from the long slumber
of your memory
my love
walking past the boundaries of
time and space
I shall remind you of
what used to be
what used to be

crystal face I kiss
tongue tastes like sweet cold rain
I fall into pond

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The following comments are for "Return To Me"
by peterpaulino

Return To Me
I truely enjoyed this. Good to see you back
writing. The last stanza is my favorite. Thanks
for sharing.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: April 3, 2007 )

Big Bang Theory
wow! that woke me up. such rich poetic fare, this. cosmic, sumptuous, dramatic… and, of course, achingly romantic… all qualities I enjoy…

I’m intrigued by the idea of an epic love story, transcending the distances of space and time, the boundaries of life and death, and the normal laws of physics… there’s an elemental passion at work here, quite capable of moving mountains… or indeed, entire galaxies, in pursuit of love…

Love’s “most awaited rarefied collision”. wonderful.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 3, 2007 )

Wanda and Shannon
Thank you very much to you two. The truth is, there may never be such love, that which transcends distances of space and time, but there will always be lovers/poets to try to express how they feel in such extremes in order to justify what they truly feel. Geez, what did I just say? Not sure if I understood it myself. However, I still will dream of epic love stories and try get lost in it. ;-)

This one's been a rewrite of what I posted here before. I repost because of some changes in some stanzas. Again, thank you.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: April 3, 2007 )

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