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i think of you too much
it's unhealthy for my heart
but i want you around me
like i never thought of anyone
before i met you

but i've been living a lie
all fabricated with fantasies
nothing good in it
but my fake heartbreak
i can feel sure this is just me
there's no you in this equation

i never had you
so i never lost you
but you made me feel
like a boy with a toy
like i had the best thing
but now it's old
and useless

where do you lead me?
what am i doing?
i should move on
without you, without love
i can't give you up
'cause i never had you
and you never thought of
having someone like me

i feel better, understanding
my efforts are in vain
that no-one gets hurt
that i can come out of this
strong and confident
that you were not meant
to love me as i try not to
love beautiful you


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