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Not yet asleep but not truly awake,
Hating yet needing the oncoming ache,
Feeling good never felt so damn wrong,
Alive, and aware after being dead for so long.

No longer obscured but not fully revealed,
Feeling pain from sores that will never be healed,
Unlike life's scars which all eventually fade,
Along with the memory of each mistake made,

So let's keep each wound fresh, a reminder eternal,
Keep the memories clear, but their scarring internal,
Save the regrets, the guilt and the tears,
and celebrate the great escape
I've been trying to

Ben Gunn 21.03.02 / 10.03.07


"Only actions matter, for any fool can dream -
and wishes count for nothing in the overall scheme..."

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