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i wrote myself a little function
to ease the process
i just can't spare any time
from self-advertising
to try and write
something surprising

but if it's all the same anyway
then image is everything

in touch with technology
outputting in mp3
to myspace for the world to see
my popularity increases
my popularity increases

void star
produce music, l-paren
unsigned int r-seed, comma
size t n-bytes, r-paren
semi-colon

i'm pedantic for punctuation
it takes so long to say it

-x2

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of all misfortune, the worst kind of fate is to have been happy.
-boethius


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The following comments are for "automation makes for easy living"
by ochimusha

automation
critical, cynical, acerbic little piece, this. with a bleak existentialism at it's heart. admirably self-contained too, I thought...

if it's easy. it probably ain't living.

thanks for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: March 25, 2007 )

i agree
haha, i could scarcely describe it better myself. i think i would replace 'image' with 'delivery' in practice though, it just flows so much better. thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

( Posted by: ochimusha [Member] On: March 25, 2007 )

In agreement
Popularity. You seem to scorn the word with the passion. Cynical Cynical says it all it seems.

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: March 25, 2007 )





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